viernes, 15 de mayo de 2009

Shoes

In 1290 nobody had shoes.
In 1291 the shoes appeared and the people were very happy but the problem was that the shoes were with cardboard and when it rained the shoes broke.
In 1299 the shoes were made with cloth, its okey that its unfashionable
And finally in 1320 were made of leather that is fashionable and it wasn`t broke and all the people wore them.

I think this invention is practical to wear. When the time is horrible and cold you can were shoes and you arent cold.

The invention written by: Daiana Tyrkiel 2ºH





1 comentario:

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